Comments on: Functional Strength and Inner Strength http://justinsbrainpan.com/413/functional-strength/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=functional-strength Kidneys, Kettlebells, Car Repair, Migraines, Fishing, Diapers, and Stay at Home Dad Stuff Wed, 01 Sep 2010 14:50:44 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Justin Matthews http://justinsbrainpan.com/413/functional-strength/comment-page-1/#comment-141 Justin Matthews Wed, 24 Feb 2010 00:40:14 +0000 http://justinsbrainpan.com/?p=413#comment-141 I really do appreciate it. I have almost given up asking my family for editing advice. They are all "oh yea its great" and don't give much constructive criticism. I think everyone needs some of that once in a while. it does help. Thanks again Justin. Ps Akismet is supposed to "learn" so I hope that you will be out of the spam queue at some point! I really do appreciate it. I have almost given up asking my family for editing advice. They are all “oh yea its great” and don’t give much constructive criticism. I think everyone needs some of that once in a while. it does help.
Thanks again
Justin.
Ps Akismet is supposed to “learn” so I hope that you will be out of the spam queue at some point!

]]> By: Megan http://justinsbrainpan.com/413/functional-strength/comment-page-1/#comment-140 Megan Tue, 23 Feb 2010 23:55:17 +0000 http://justinsbrainpan.com/?p=413#comment-140 Looks great like this... I offered the critique because it was one of your goals - you can't grow if nobody ever helps you out. I don't normally go around correcting people's work :) (although, I will admit to having books with typos, etc... marked in them). Yours, Megan .-= Megan´s last blog ..<a href="http://www.limitlessliving.ca/daring-monday-fear-less/" rel="nofollow">Daring Monday: Fear-Less</a> =-. Looks great like this… I offered the critique because it was one of your goals – you can’t grow if nobody ever helps you out. I don’t normally go around correcting people’s work :) (although, I will admit to having books with typos, etc… marked in them).

Yours,
Megan
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]]> By: Justin Matthews http://justinsbrainpan.com/413/functional-strength/comment-page-1/#comment-139 Justin Matthews Tue, 23 Feb 2010 22:21:18 +0000 http://justinsbrainpan.com/?p=413#comment-139 Was in spam but I will approve it anyway! thanks for the critique, I do like opinions. I will go back and read this again for clarity. I have been having computer crashing problems today and posted it quickly without reading it again. Thanks for the heads up. I really need to get my pre writing done so I have better quality posts to send out. Thanks for the constructive criticism. Justin OK I have edited the post! It did sound fragmented and like I finished it too quickly. Editing is good everyone! Thanks again Megan it is good to have you watching my back. Was in spam but I will approve it anyway! thanks for the critique, I do like opinions. I will go back and read this again for clarity. I have been having computer crashing problems today and posted it quickly without reading it again. Thanks for the heads up. I really need to get my pre writing done so I have better quality posts to send out. Thanks for the constructive criticism.
Justin

OK I have edited the post! It did sound fragmented and like I finished it too quickly.
Editing is good everyone!
Thanks again Megan it is good to have you watching my back.

]]> By: Megan http://justinsbrainpan.com/413/functional-strength/comment-page-1/#comment-138 Megan Tue, 23 Feb 2010 22:13:20 +0000 http://justinsbrainpan.com/?p=413#comment-138 In the interest of your better writing goal, I hope this critique is ok (and by all means, don't feel obligated to post it when you find it in the spam!). I really liked where you were going with this and what you were doing... but then, it felt a little broken at the end. If for your closing you had somehow tied the functional strength back into the inner strength that would have made it feel complete. Otherwise, I'm wondering why you even mentioned it... do you have it? Do you want it? Hope that's useful! Yours, Megan In the interest of your better writing goal, I hope this critique is ok (and by all means, don’t feel obligated to post it when you find it in the spam!).

I really liked where you were going with this and what you were doing… but then, it felt a little broken at the end. If for your closing you had somehow tied the functional strength back into the inner strength that would have made it feel complete. Otherwise, I’m wondering why you even mentioned it… do you have it? Do you want it?

Hope that’s useful!

Yours,
Megan

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